I have asked for few people about the American dream and realized that most of them had the same opinion with me. In fact, I am only an immigrant and not an U.S. citizen yet. To me, the American dream is extremely simple: improve my family’s life and get the best education to be success. Basically, my dream is not different than the dream of others Americans. Everyone, including the U.S. citizens, the immigrants, and migrants, always wants to have a goof life without worrying about money, food, or clothes…also, to reach that dream life, education is required as the most important factor. That is why they all dream about education and a pink life. Because my family and I are the immigrants, our dreams are the same absolutely. It also is a dram that my [parents have put on me since I was a little girl. I wonder if there are someone says that the America is not fulfilling the promise of the American dream for everyone, I will argue them. In my opinion, the America has enough ability to make every dream come true. From dreams about life and wealth to freedom and equality dreams, the America can fulfill it. Just as people knows, the U.S. gives everyone the rights for freedom, make benefits for students to study, and creates jobs to help people’s lives. It is possible for any American to reach their dream. However, to see if their dreams can come true, it depends on people work hard or not. Of course, all people in America have equal opportunities to reach their dreams. I am sure that it is easier for some people to achieve the American Dream than others. Since being hard-working, people have more opportunities to make dreams come true. If people do not work and only wait for reaching dreams, the given chances will pass over them. The people around the world all have the same dreams with Americans, but it would not be possible to achieve in some countries. I believe the American Dream still worth believing and pursuing because those dreams are their future. Just like others, I am working hard to pursue my dream step by step. The first part in my American Dream is to get high grades in school and I make it come true. My parents feel so happy and proud of me since I get A’s for all my classes. I believe that my American Dream will be reached soon if I keep working this hard. Then I can render thanks to my parents with a better future.


I also think that the American Dream is to improve the family and get a better education to be successful becaus that’s why I also came to America. Your paragraph about the American Dream has a lot important facts about reaching the dream, and give specific examples about your life, which makes it even better. I truely agree that the people who accomplishes their dream are the hard- working people because they always keep on going until they reach the finish line. Lastly, I really like your post.